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How to draw a portrait ^_^ tutorial by Nieris
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Usually "drawing a portrait" means also the sketching stage, so this is more of a "how to color a portrait". :) But let's get back to th...

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Usually "drawing a portrait" means also the sketching stage, so this is more of a "how to color a portrait". :) But let's get back to the topic.
First thing I want to mention is... your additional notes & sketches in between the tutorial frames. I feel like they need their personal space (especially those colors that lay under the text).
Next, the positioning. The right side of the picture looks heavy and pressing to the left (and her whole body looks like leaning, I guess that wasn't intended?). If not to change background: make three imaginary vertical lines that cut the piece in equal parts, it would be better to place her head at the right line.
The anatomy is fine (thought her left eye isn't at the right place :D).
What is best about the tutorial - is how detailed and clear it is! To my mind, this is obligatory to be understandable.
Also, the tutorial page looks messy and the mixture of typed and written text looks like it is still a rough copy of it.
(also, I can help u with english :D)
Good luck!
Uni by JaneGane
Uni
OC of my own universe
the Creator that isn't much of creator - more of a shapeshifter and playful deciever that just loves! to play with ppl and the other Creator Tokos
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sweets
it had to look like pineapple in a crust and ice cream, but I didn't manage to
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Zenyatta says by JaneGane
Zenyatta says
04.06.16
Better listen to Zenyatta and don't get him angry ;>
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Marsalinapocalypse Featured By Owner May 11, 2015
Hello! Thank you so much for the watch, it's greatly appreciated! :D
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BlondTheColorist Featured By Owner May 30, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks for watching.
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pikaole Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you so much for the watch :)
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RedZane Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yes!!! More sexy Lavi.....wait what I didnt say that. LOL!! Thank u!!!!
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JaneGane Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2013  Hobbyist
Ahaha)) there'll be more.)
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NemesiHouseburns Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks for the watch!
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RedZane Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Keep chasing after your dream girl!!! U only have one life to live and u should'nt regret anything.
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onez82 Featured By Owner May 21, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
thanks for the +WATCH
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